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Thinking Out Loud
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 08:10:56 PM in AEST
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While I think about it, I think I'll think out loud. I was speaking to your heart but it suddenly turned deaf. Thinking about love with tears in my eyes, can't I just go back a bit so that I could try.
Well I love you but the feeling's not the same. Nothing ever went according to my plan. By now we should be together, kissing, holding hands.
Maybe someday I can win, but the future doesn't look to bright. Sometimes it just makes me wish that my life had a light.
Sometimes I go crazy and I say it is enough, but I can't stop loving you, no matter if times are rough. Well I would be there for you whenever you are in need. What must I do to show you that I would'nt let your heart grow weeds.
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Re: Thinking Out Loud
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by FRANCO on
Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 08:39:57 PM AEST
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It is a wonderful reflection of the mood.
great.
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Re: Thinking Out Loud
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 02:22:58 PM AEST
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A strong flow of feelings alongside of 'Thinking Out Loud.' Keep writing as the review of what is penned will teach you over and over again.
Good Job
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Thinking Out Loud
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by itsnotme on
Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 05:18:03 PM AEST
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thanks for the write made a me remember
seems like a circle i know to well,until you break the spell,
the light will come shinning i know this to well
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Re: Thinking Out Loud
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 22nd March 2007 @ 07:27:38 PM AEST
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great dedication,
If she could see your heart
She would know she has nothing to fear.
Good write,
I too wish I didn't feel so much
God bless you
It will all work.
one day |
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