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She Cries

Contributed by xXdeadXpoetXx on Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 03:44:02 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

on the floor, she cries
she set herself up
she smoked and she drank
and she drugged herself up

she sat and she cryed
and she cut herself up

she couldn't find hope
to pull herself up

she stands in the room
a shadow to the walls
she's stopped it all
she stands now, tall

she swears she's over it
dumps her friends
she's done feeling small

but is that all?

shes above the influence
above the life
she led
the tears
she shed

the holes in the wall
a dirty reminder to her
to all
she patches it up
along with her soul
she's whole
she's clean and trying
to fight
for what she thinks is right
she'll put up a fight

her words were the worst
"don't get lost in the crowd,
get lost in yourself
stay narrow, stay proud.
alone and intoxicated;
no way you can live,
cut off your sources.
live like you don't live."

and now she dies sober
warm in her bed
visions of past lives
dance in her head
she can't bare to think
she's only thirty-six
thats what you get
when you get your kicks
if she never touched
a joint or a smoke
if the bottle didn't dance
on her lips til she choked
if she hadn't gone bad
at the age of thirteen
she'd be alive
thriving
strong-willed and clean

Copyright © xXdeadXpoetXx ... [ 2007-03-20 15:44:02]
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Re: She Cries (User Rating: 1 )
by Sena on Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 08:22:45 AM AEST
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very creative and expressive write. I enjoyed reading it...thx for sharing.

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