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YOU KNOW YOU NEVER....
Contributed by
airhead
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Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 02:49:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You know you never hurt me
I know your love is true
Some things you find hard to control
They’re so deep within you
I’m just feeling lost right now
All I do is love you & care
About you oh my love
And wish I was right there
Don’t wipe me from your mind
Don’t cast me away to the side
You know I’ll always be your friend
There’s feelings we just can’t hide
So as you go on your journey
Of fixing yourself, heart & mind
I’m still right there with you
Your little Sunshine
‘Til the end of all time
Copyright ©
airhead
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2007-03-20 14:49:28]
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Re: YOU KNOW YOU NEVER....
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 04:55:55 PM AEST
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| Nice sentiment here, but I also see a slight hint of I told you so. I could easily put myself down as the person being talked about in this poem. Now that is wierd, or am I losing it. Well what I really am trying to say is this poem is so lifelike and true. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Well done , fantastic poem . Sue x |
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Re: YOU KNOW YOU NEVER....
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 10:06:52 PM AEST
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This was good. I liked the feelings that I got from this poem. You did a good job. Great poem.
Take care
Christina |
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