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lost

Contributed by itsnotme on Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 01:08:49 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Do you know how it feels to be lost?

Lost in this world unable to feel
Heart so broken not able to heal

To turn the page free from rage
Feels like…….. I’m in a cage

Unable to turn left or right
Always looking for the fight

All I want to do is take flight
See the world from a great height

As I look down and see you stare
I’ll turn away from your glare

I am beaten so unfair
I gave you my love but you don’t care

Passion for hatred and I still care
For the two little boys, I left there

Do they know there father is dead?
Dead inside from your deceit

I was honest and real, did you have to steal.
My heart so damaged I cant see

Getting past this is so hard

I miss my boys because of you

When they go to bed do they ask for me?
Or do they just turn the other cheek

So I wonder what you ve told them
So they don’t call me so I can hold them

The lies you told to cover your tracks
Our old friends see me and turn their backs

Seven years you did steal cant believe this is real
Any moment I will wake up
From this sentence,

it was my mistake

Copyright Â© itsnotme ... [ 2007-03-20 13:08:49]
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Re: lost (User Rating: 1 )
by AirHead on Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 02:00:40 PM AEST
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This is so sad & touched me deep because I know something of what it's like to feel like you do.........

Some women are just like how you describe, she obviously wasn't worthy of you, but please don't let it stop you moving forward, someone is out there who will really truly love you next time around, it'll be hard but you will just need to believe in them & yourself.

Trust me not everyone is the same, you will find your way and I'm sure you are never far away from your little boys thoughts & one day you will see & hold them again. Take care

ps Loved the poem....i'm sure there's lots of guys out there who can relate to it

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