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Hopeless Revival
Contributed by
allforyou
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Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 12:09:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Grey skies cloud over me as if he's left,
but he's here.
Doctor, tell me what's wrong with me.
The morning sprays into my eyes, I don't feel,
like you feel.
Babe, can't you help me out today?
My mind stutters worse than broken records,
left to play.
Lord, is there a way to stop it?
All I can taste is champagne when it hits,
lights go out.
Squeeze, can you please just turn me on.
Mother asked if I could bring myself home,
but I can't.
Kiddo, I think I've gone too far.
Crumpled papers mimick my lost spirit,
and I'm gone.
Sugar, my revival's hopeless.
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allforyou
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2007-03-20 12:09:50]
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Re: Hopeless Revival
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by angel_eyes70 on
Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 12:40:32 PM AEST
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| OMG! I love this so much! Its it something youu can read over and over againnn |
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Re: Hopeless Revival
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by myheartsvoice on
Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 05:24:15 PM AEST
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You don't know it but this poem was almost medcinal for me, haveing a bad day, that makes 2 of us. great write hope tomorrow's better.
Ben |
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