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Seaside Rendezvous
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 10:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Darling I will keep the fires burning
embers glowing with a constant light
fueled by this one mans eternal yearning
for the love that haunts my soul each night
Constant as the stars I am awaiting
there beside the waters will I be
with the purest heart anticipating
one more time to hold you close to me
In my mind you walk beside the ocean
bare feet in the white and shifting sands
promising forever your devotion
as you reach for me with trembling hands
If you are a dream, do not awaken
let me now and ever dwell in sleep
reality will gladly be forsaken
for one more seaside rendezvous to keep
L. Carling c2007
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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Re: Seaside Rendezvous
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by emystar on
Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 10:25:30 PM AEST
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Good luvk.
Great writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Seaside Rendezvous
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by EternitysLyre on
Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 10:29:50 PM AEST
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| Have we ever doubted you? |
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Re: Seaside Rendezvous
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 10:40:27 PM AEST
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Would you mind if I toss roses ?
I sometimes find my meter slightly off from yours
* I know ... we have been through this before ... at least once ... *
I read this line ... "bare feet in the white and shifting sands" ... without the "and" ... I have learned though ... with you ... it is there for a reason.
I just thought I'd share.
As always ... well penned, my good sir.
Nazzy ~
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Re: Seaside Rendezvous
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by Dom on
Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 10:35:33 AM AEST
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Simply beauttiful, stark images, I feel like I could be on that beach.
Dom |
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Re: Seaside Rendezvous
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 10:50:31 AM AEST
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Who would want to awake from such a vivid picture of paradise and love? Magnificent write!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Seaside Rendezvous
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by kye on
Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 06:58:12 PM AEST
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Ah a seaside rendezvous....Perfect..
Your poetry inspires me to dream, think and perhaps even write. Great poetry captivates the reader.
I can see strands of light awakening the sky and pale sand comforming to whomever it touches. Now my imagination is going on a binge!
I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you, Thank you.. |
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Re: Seaside Rendezvous
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 11:56:55 AM AEST
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Larry,
Your writes forever and always have a beautiful ring to them. The melody is
sometimes heartbreaking, sometimes utterly delightful, but ever and always
do they fill hearts with emotion that not many have the presence or skill to produce.
This piece, in particular has a lovely ethereal feel to it. One can slip between the
softness of the lines and become totally emersed in the beautiful melancholy.
Larry, your writes never cease to impress me and lull me into a dream where I am able
to articulate thoughts, emotions, and wishes as beautifully and wonderfully as you.
Superb, as always ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Seaside Rendezvous
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 23rd March 2007 @ 07:54:22 PM AEST
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Dearest Larry~
I echo the sentiments of my other fellow poets here and I would also like to add that
this was simply *Flawless*~
Absolutely beautiful in every way. Well done
my dear friend.
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m
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Re: Seaside Rendezvous
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by Putteragain on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 11:39:37 AM AEST
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it has been a long time for me, since i have read your work
and let me just say you have a golden pen
beautiful
made me wish i were her |
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Re: Seaside Rendezvous
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by Clarity_Rising on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 02:29:47 AM AEST
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This poem is very sentimental
and tragic. I love how you are
able to describe you feelings of
loneliness and gentle misery through
a spectacularly well described
scene. Great work!
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Re: Seaside Rendezvous
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 06:23:52 AM AEST
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larry, i love it:) you know, its so wonderful for me to read you this afternoon, and to know that somewhere in this precarious world i might find some stability and peace, as your poetry has always given to me..
love n' hugs nessa
roses for the king |
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