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Death Be Near
Contributed by
alison
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Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 10:34:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Death be my friend,
Come quickly,
Come, my arms are open to you,
Be near, knock on my door and rattle my window,
Embrace my cold frozen heart,
Take my body to its grave,
Death be my comfort,
Come near,
Come my time should be over,
Be closer, take the air I breathe,
Enclose my barren empty heart,
Take me to the end of this road,
Death be my companion,
Come now!
Come, I give what is left to you,
My heart has passed long ago,
There is nothing left to be saved,
Death is here.
Copyright ©
alison
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2007-03-18 22:34:01]
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Re: Death Be Near
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by Stellar on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 11:39:59 PM AEST
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| Wow, I love this. I've definitely been there before. Whatever their situation, I'm sure many people will be able to to relate to this. |
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Re: Death Be Near
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by Mesano on
Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 12:56:59 AM AEST
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| it's a bit dark, and almost scary, but i know lots of people can relate. |
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Re: Death Be Near
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by kelkel on
Monday, 19th March 2007 @ 10:56:54 AM AEST
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Very well written i know what this feeling is like and glad i over came it
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Re: Death Be Near
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by whiteleo1984 on
Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 03:34:57 PM AEST
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| interesting write... nicely dun |
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