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May I Rest In Peace.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 01:20:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Drape me in a velvet veil
A rose upon my skin
Let the thorns spill my blood
Release me from within
The pulsating beat of my inner storm
A collection of clouds and falling rain
Teardrops from eyes
Diamond streams laced with pain
As I lay me down to sleep
I offer you my heart to keep
As I descend to the end
Of an eternity to weep
A hopeless romantic with broken dreams
The hands of despair tugging at my seams
Underneath a setting sun
Falling to pieces
I come undone
May my broken heart find it's rest
As I lying dying in your arms
Your name still etched across my chest
Signed..."XOXOXO...Sincerely, Me"
May I rest in peace eternally.
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bleedthelove
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2007-03-18 13:20:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: May I Rest In Peace.
(User Rating: 1 ) by needledancing on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 03:50:34 PM AEST (User
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Very well written.
Let the thorns spill my blood
Release me from within. My favourite lines.
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Re: May I Rest In Peace.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mesano on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 04:27:10 PM AEST (User
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Wow. Very nice job here. It's full of emotion, has a great flow, and is just well written in general. I really enjoyed reading this. The words you have written here are extremely powerful.
Amazing job. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: May I Rest In Peace.
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 09:38:49 PM AEST (User
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Excellent flow |
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