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The Player
Contributed by
kelkel
on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 12:42:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Why must I live
with sorrow in my heart.
You left me and
tore my world
apart.
We have three kids
how do I explain.
You took off
in A hurry
and caught the
first plane.
They always say
the grass is greener
on the other side.
But I dont see you
going far with the
way you lie.
Now here you are
six months later.
But I said
goodbye I dont
need A player.
Copyright ©
kelkel
... [
2007-03-18 12:42:21]
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Re: The Player
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 03:00:27 PM AEST
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| sad, but nicely done. hope everything works out for you |
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Re: The Player
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by Loriann on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 03:21:59 PM AEST
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yeah I know all about the players. this is great.
He was a jerk be glad he gone well you are so lol.
Loriann |
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Re: The Player
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 03:46:18 PM AEST
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Sad indeed...is forgiving impossible?
Would you want to be forgiven?
It's a tough one.....but people make mistakes that can't be undone? What do they do pay forever....?
Who am I to ask?
Good luck with this one... |
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Re: The Player
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 04:55:14 PM AEST
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| Powerful words I see here. No one needs a player. Sue x |
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Re: The Player
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 09:41:30 PM AEST
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| Strong emotional flow |
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