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I Miss
Contributed by
Fairiepsycho
on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 11:11:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I miss the way you made me laugh,
and the way you held me tight.
I miss the way we used to kiss,
and how I felt safe at night.
I miss the way your hands moved,
slowly over my face.
I miss the way you looked at me,
with every close embrace.
I miss your smile,
and your every little touch.
I was so stupid,
because I miss you so much.
I miss the moments,
when we were all alone.
There wasn't a space between us,
and everything was known.
I miss the days,
when you'd just hold me.
In your arms is
where I want to be.
But you're gone now,
and I can't feel your touch.
I was so stupid,
because I miss you so much.
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Fairiepsycho
... [
2007-03-17 23:11:08]
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Re: I Miss
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 11:21:00 PM AEST
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| We consume ourselves with what we felt and then it vanishes...and we are lost. On this planet of a million people there is another who has a sense of value for YOU. It will be grander and more intense than this past love. Trust me and get out there so he can find you. Let me add I love this write because without it I could not get mad enough at someone hurting you and causing you this anguish to tell you so Hugs always ND |
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Re: I Miss
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 12:41:16 AM AEST
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Truly a most revealing of one's emotions is the hallmark of this touching work. And quite apparent your experiencing some turbulance in your life. none the less beautiful style and presentation. Her's wishing you a gentle healing of your heart and spirit.
Ben |
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Re: I Miss
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by AirHead on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 06:06:26 AM AEST
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| I like this one...........very good |
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Re: I Miss
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 07:40:10 AM AEST
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| This is a well put together poem, but stupid because you miss someone? No, it happends to most of us. |
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