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A Sweet Goodbye
Contributed by
Smartie
on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 05:58:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Each day I passed you in the hall
Each day I just walked right by
I never once tried to say hello
Even when I knew it would help
One more moment passes
And with it gone, so are you
And all I can say now is bye
So here's my sweet goodbye
Each moment you were gone
Everyone had let out a tear
Without even knowing you
I shared in everyone's sorrow
We will always remember you
With the little memoires we have
I wish you would have know
Just if you could have seen
All these people who care
Everyone one in tears
Just becasue of you
Not a person went untouched
I'm sorry I never said hello
But for you now I wish you
The most sweet goodbye
All our thoughts are with you
Copyright ©
Smartie
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2007-03-17 17:58:01]
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Re: A Sweet Goodbye
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by Fairiepsycho on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 12:23:57 AM AEST
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Absolutely amazing, heart touching write. I love this poem very much. I went through something like this when I was in high school, but when I tried to write about it I just couldn't seem to find the right words to use. You've done it perfectly. Wonderfully written. Hope to read more of your writings soon!
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Re: A Sweet Goodbye
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 09:04:58 AM AEST
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This was sad and heartfelt. You did a great job expressing your feelings and thoughts. This was a good poem. sad but good.
Take care
Christina
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Re: A Sweet Goodbye
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by Smartie on
Thursday, 29th March 2007 @ 10:19:10 PM AEST
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Thanks so much for your comments
means a lot to me that they're not only read
but also liked
Smartie |
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