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Dismantle Me And Don’t Reassemble
Contributed by
Channing
on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 01:47:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Tear out my eyes
I don’t want to see
As our world closes in on itself
Cut off my ears
I don’t want to hear
As everyone screams their death screams
Snap my vocal chords
I don’t want to speak
My words of regret
Break my legs
I don’t want to walk
Nor continue on through this
Remove my arms
I don’t want to reach
Out to any earthly being
I don’t have the strength
Or the courage to fight anymore
So take my soul
For I don’t want to feel
The suffering that shall ensue,
You made me, now I’m begging,
Break me God,
Please break me
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2007-03-17 13:47:02]
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Re: Dismantle Me And Don’t Reassemble
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sena on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 02:04:24 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this...very expressive write. Thx for sharing. |
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Re: Dismantle Me And Don’t Reassemble
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 10:31:20 PM AEST
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Good grief, this was gut-wrenching!! Limitless pain
abounds in and between each and every line. Suffering
like this is a horrible way to feel, but you have captured the
emotion of never again wanting to sense another thing
so masterfully. Excellent piece and I hope things become
brighter for you in the future .. (easy to say, I know .. I know)
I feel ya ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Dismantle Me And Don’t Reassemble
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 4th April 2007 @ 09:56:54 PM AEST
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Very expressive. I liked the title too. Great poem.
Take care
Christina |
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