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My Angel
Contributed by
Loriann
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Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 01:13:42 PM in AEST
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You are my angel so far but so near.
Always making me feel that you are right here.
Watching over me with such care.
Lifting a heavy burden which at times it too much to bare.
You are my light through the dark.
A match to ignite such a beautiful spark.
A spark to ignite a love so grand.
Each and every time to reach for my hand.
Guiding me through life s ups and downs.
Wiping away all of my saddened frowns.
Protecting me from lifes harsh harms.
Keeping me warm and safe in your loving strong arms.
You are my angel protecting me so safe and true.
Allowing me to love and trust in you.
Trusting the strenght that you give to me.
A postive glow for all to see.
You are my angel so far but yet so near.
Keeping me safe as though you are here.
Never letting me fall.
Guiding me through it all.
Loving me for who I am .
Showing to all you want to be my man.
You are my angel I will never let you go.
Because my angel I love you so.
Copyright ©
Loriann
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2007-03-16 13:13:42]
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Re: My Angel
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by kelkel on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 01:16:34 PM AEST
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| WOW very nice good job |
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Re: My Angel
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 01:26:37 PM AEST
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Very good job here --- I really enjoyed this! I can actually see this being read as a vow of love at a wedding, or posted on a fridge as a family mantra or something (if that makes sense!) I love this write, and it just flows so nicely too. This was my favourite part:
You are my light through the dark.
A match to ignite such a beautiful spark.
Thanks for posting!
~Scorp.
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Re: My Angel
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 03:26:47 PM AEST
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Loriann .. I'm with scorpy on this. Definitely a vow of love
for sure! This was incredibly open and beautiful. I
sure hope he appreciates the kind of love he has in you.
It is a rare and treasured thing ~
Loverly thoughts here .. just loverly
~Breezy |
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Re: My Angel
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by Mesano on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 07:22:33 PM AEST
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| nicely done.. i especially liked the last 2 lines... lots of emotion here, keep it up |
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Re: My Angel
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by priss on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 09:53:20 PM AEST
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oh, i must agree with the other comments. just beautiful, and like breezy said, so open. nice job!
~priss |
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Re: My Angel
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by needledancing on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 03:33:38 AM AEST
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| Definately a love song...handed down by the angels themselves..well done |
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