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bi-chemical
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 11:07:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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By chamical
Single chemical
Any chemicals
Tells my
Synapse
You're not
Not special
Just a disciple
Tripping on a foreign path
You will deliever
A chaotic pass
To interpret the real
Your analization
Is so **** up
Self-centered and shallow
You will always be ****
Telling people
What they need to hear
*********************************************************
No savior
Blackend soul
Beyound a glow
Tells my
Synapse
You're just one
No control
You're not
Special
Slipping pass rightious ways
You are the punk
A chaotic reign
And your minds eye
Your minds eye
Is so ****
Unconfedent and hollow
You are always a slut
******* the people
They way the love
***************************************
WE ARE ALL HOLLOW
WE ARE ALL SHALLOW
WE WILL DIE BY
CHEMICAL
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2007-03-15 23:07:19]
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Re: bi-chemical
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 06:15:56 AM AEST
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Deep deep and very scary
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Re: bi-chemical
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 04:12:08 PM AEST
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Vividly and forcefully written. It's well done, but the (pardon) terrible spelling definitely detracts from its power. Computer word processors are your friend.
Keep it up.
Andrew |
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Re: bi-chemical
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by xXdeadXpoetXx on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 02:03:12 PM AEST
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| amazing. i got lost in rhyme. great write. |
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