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Suicide
Contributed by
Giggles1245
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Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 03:38:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As she holds her knees to her chest
Thinking her life was the best
She now knows her life was lies
Now all she wants to do is die
But the one thing thats keeping her here
Is the one that made her shed a tear
So what must I do? she thought to herself
Grab the knife right off the shelf?
Or put it back in its rightful place
I just to need to get away,to get some space
She knows she needs to but she wont
She asks her love and he says dont!
But she ignores him, and puts him to shame,
For the reason she bleeds,is him to blame
He left her alone,he left her to fight
She was sad and lonely that whole night
Days gone by, and still he doesnt care
She wanted some love,if only he`d share
But one night he came to her door
Just to see her lying on the floor
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Giggles1245
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2007-03-15 03:38:44]
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Re: Suicide
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 08:33:33 AM AEST
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| good piece....always glad when the introduction specifies....your fine. Makes the piece much easier to absorb. |
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Re: Suicide
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by Saloni on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 11:07:41 AM AEST
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| wowwwwww |
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Re: Suicide
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by Loriann on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 12:32:37 PM AEST
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Wow this is a very powerful write. I got teary eyed reading. Excellent job.
Loriann |
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Re: Suicide
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by kelkel on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 12:40:05 PM AEST
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| This poem is very deep i know a few people who feel this way |
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Re: Suicide
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by skibblez on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 01:02:54 PM AEST
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| i personally think that thiz waz the best one i have read on thiz site or for that matter anyother site i wish that i waz az strong az you and didnt hurt myself over boys but im not and its sad but thiz poem really explains how i feel good job!!!! keep upp tha good workk honey |
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