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Untitled
Contributed by
DemOn_ANgeL
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Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 03:26:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I touch those lips while you cried
I danced you till the moonlight died
I tried to hold you so tight, but time so bites
I called you everyday, every minute but what happened
you didn't remember anything
I went to your school so we could talk
I saw you laughing a smirg on my face went
but then you saw me you ran out the door
I didn't waste everything
atleast I can remember everything
our first kiss until last
doe I still love you I'm willing to forget
just don't cry to someone else
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DemOn_ANgeL
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2007-03-15 03:26:50]
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 )
by Giggles1245 on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 03:42:38 AM AEST
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| Oh wow, I like this one alot. It's very pretty and has great use of words. You get a 10 from me, if we can/could rate. :D |
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Re: Untitled
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by Loriann on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 12:29:46 PM AEST
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This is very good. I like the use of the words.
Great Job
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