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In the sky
Contributed by
rhei76
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Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 07:42:51 PM in AEST
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Eyes on a star in the East
Thoughts of that unforgotten feast
Once now all asleep
Where stored, life's defeat
Watching her centered sky
She was the answer to why
Once now we all cry
By our memories for awhile
She gives me a tear
More beautiful than salt
Although just an instance
Just a spark
I believe
She's the one
Who
Watches over me
& I know when I die
She won't be there
She won't be there
Until I learn
To be alive
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2007-03-14 19:42:51]
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Re: In the sky
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 09:24:57 PM AEST
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| This was a very deep and thoughtful poem. Excellent Job! |
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Re: In the sky
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by needledancing on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 08:37:18 AM AEST
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Beautifully done Rhei....she won't be there Until I learn
To be alive.
She gives me a tear
More beautiful than salt. These lines jump out at me...well done |
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