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Without You
Contributed by
Loriann
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Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 04:31:25 PM in AEST
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No more tears have I shed.
No more thoughts of you fill my head.
I have moved on to a life so new.
A life no longer controlled by you.
No more lies do I hear.
No more threats for me to fear.
You put me down to a level so low.
With every cruel word it felt like another low blow.
Now I am strong and as happy as can be.
Because now I finally found someone who wants to be with me.
A new angel god has sent from above.
A new angel from god who shows such wonderouse love.
So go on with her in your new life.
Maybe someday she can be your wife.
Until the forget all about you and me.
And let me finally be happy and free.
Free to be with the man I love.
The man god has sent me from above.
Without you I shed no tears.
Without you I no longer have any fears.
I am now protected and safe from your harms.
Because I am here and safe in my new loves arms.
Copyright ©
Loriann
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2007-03-14 16:31:25]
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Re: Without You
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by hgillila on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 08:53:34 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem, for every girl who has been an ex girlfriend. Great job! |
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Re: Without You
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by bratty_wifey209 on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 01:50:20 PM AEST
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| wow this is a wonderful poem..... sounds like you wrote it to my (husband).... hey maybe he has a evil twin as evil as he is....... thanks for sharing... |
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Re: Without You
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by Alex23 on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 08:12:21 PM AEST
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| Well, coming from a guy's perspective, this is a powerful write, entailing that we aren't the ones always feeling it. Good job on this one! |
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