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Throughout
Contributed by
artjunkiekyle
on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 02:43:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Through all the tears and misery, you will always be resilient and perservere.
Still true to sight you reflect fiery beauty with surreal love only because none can handle your exuberant glow.
Through all the pain and sorrow you held up your chin
even through the descent to hell and back.
Comfort could always be found in your words.
Security was always provided.
There is no longer a need for melancholy times.
Through all the fights and overxposure you helped me pull through.
My frown is now a broken smile- my fraudulent mealticket.
You provided me with my effervescent mask.
Through EVERYTHING, you were there- even though you were gone.
Copyright ©
artjunkiekyle
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2007-03-14 14:43:39]
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Re: Throughout
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 05:23:34 PM AEST
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kyle .. good grief! There is enormous emotional power
in that last line .. especially the last five words ..
I know this pain .. and intimately so. I wish that
humans could understand the inherent needs of
others better. And more compassionately. It's a very
cruel and heartless world sometimes ... the necessities
of life are not necessarily conducive with the necessities
of a human heart's well being.
sorry you had to deal with this kind of emotion and
I hope that your world is filled with more light and
compassion now ..
Very brave and beautiful.. these words ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Throughout
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 09:11:03 PM AEST
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As much as the intent of this piece may be for another I read this as a serious lecture in a mirror; a way to pick oneself up by the scruff finishing with a finger under the chin and staring straight into ones eyes reciting this piece word for word. Renewed "Throughout" one can face crisis in any medium. Well Done
Bravo
Peace
Yang |
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