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Invisible Heart
Contributed by
gurlg0newr0ng
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Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 02:16:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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And I knew it was wrong, I knew it all along
Though I even had myself convinced
that's how bad I wanted this
it didn't take long for me to see
One look in his eyes and it was plain to me
What was soon to become of us, now look what's left of us
There you lay, smiling, defenseless, and so secure
Here I stand with my armor on and I am so unsure
Looks like you'll never break me
Looks like you'll never make me your fool
and you will never have your way
And Underneath it all I'm bleeding
You know how looks can be deceiving
But, I wear my heart upon my sleeve
my invisible heart which you don't seem to see
There you were, looking innocent with the evidence all around
There I was, looking dissapointed because you had let me down
Though I won't shed a tear for fear you'll take my weakness and use it against me
And underneath my sheild I'm bleeding
It's only made of glass you see and
I wear my heart upon my sleeve
My invisible heart which you don't care to see
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Re: Invisible Heart
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by artjunkiekyle on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 02:48:06 PM AEST
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this is very heavy and i can so easily relate. thanks for posting.
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Re: Invisible Heart
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by UrMyInspiration on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 03:43:30 PM AEST
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| I can most definitely relate to this... Very well done. |
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Re: Invisible Heart
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by Loriann on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 04:17:39 PM AEST
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This is a very powerful write. I can relate to this in a way with my ex. Very excelent work.
Loriann |
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Re: Invisible Heart
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 08:11:34 PM AEST
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I like this!
It draws me in and holds me until the very end.
A great story, very poetically done while leaving me wanting to know more. |
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