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Comatose
Contributed by
maelstroms_child
on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 05:42:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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If life is a dream,
it's a nightmare for most.
Seduced by these demons,
our heart is the host.
You may fight all you want,
but the evil will win.
Lust, hate, and fear,
are the roots within.
If life is a dream,
will we ever wake up?
A dream within a dream
inside this ***** we made up.
I fight for my soul,
but it can't be won.
because the battles I win,
are all lost when I'm done.
I woke up from this dream,
into a world of lies.
Taken apart my everything,
and now I realize.
I'll never know a ***** thing,
the answers can't be found.
Because what I called awakening
is the dream I'm in now.
No matter how high I get,
I'm still far too low.
No matter how much I see,
I'll still never know.
All the truths that I've found,
this knowledge I keep.
In this subjective world,
we can't see beneath.
What I called awakening
is the dream I'm in now.
I'll never wake up.
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maelstroms_child
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2007-03-13 05:42:18]
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Re: Comatose
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 08:17:26 AM AEST
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The words- What I called awakening is the dream I'm in now.- Very insightful. Good piece lots of truth and awareness of what is around us.
Seduced by these demons, our heart is the host. Wow...truly well done |
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Re: Comatose
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by Sick_Little_Fetish on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 08:17:33 AM AEST
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I've felt like this before.
And yes, if life is a dream it IS a nightmare for most. Good write
-K |
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Re: Comatose
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by maelstroms_child on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 08:53:58 AM AEST
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| Thank you both for your comments. I am glad you enjoyed and got something out of it. That's what we write for :) |
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