|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
All Together, On The Count Of Three...
Contributed by
AKA_Anonymous
on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 01:21:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
|
Simple hellos fade into sad goodbyes,
Another heart torn out from its seam.
So real, this pain, it's almost fake;
In this sorrow, we find beauty,
In another day's salvation, we all awake.
Everyone adorned in scarlet affliction.
As it smothers the broken spirit,
Watch as it suffocates;
As it singes the heart,
Watch it incinerate.
Drink in the passion to its last fatal drop,
Thrive in hope's gentle hold.
Indulge in the uncertainty that you may fall,
And as you're caught when you do,
Take heart in this fact: no one's truly alone.
Breaking hearts don't beat the same,
Every mouth mumbles its own sad song.
All so different, yet so alike,
Hand in hand, heart in heart,
We'll take our bow, love's requiem sung.
Copyright ©
AKA_Anonymous
... [
2007-03-13 01:21:08]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: All Together, On The Count Of Three...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Karlee14 on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 04:36:10 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I liked this. You have some real talent here
buddy. Keep up the good work, I'll be reading
~Karlee |
|
|
Re: All Together, On The Count Of Three...
(User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 08:55:53 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| The first verse is the truth of loves comings and goings. It recognizes loves destruction but gives us the hope of another day of hand in hand and heart in heart.Well done |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
