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never right
Contributed by
ninad14
on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 09:02:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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this ink could be my blood, pouring from my heart
this paper just a sponge, absorbing what you've torn apart.
these words could be my heart beats, i die with everyone
i wave my white flag in defeat, with this fight i'm done.
my persistence has wavered, and some may call me weak,
but after all these tears i've shed, why should it be you that i still seek?
your conscience now swim freely and the burden you carry is light.
you may not have been in the wrong,
but you were never in the right .
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2007-03-12 21:02:44]
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Re: never right
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by needledancing on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 09:31:52 PM AEST
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| Good write...love can be a brutal teacher. |
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Re: never right
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by dazzlingprecious on
Wednesday, 10th February 2010 @ 08:35:59 AM AEST
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| I enjoy it. |
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Re: never right
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th February 2010 @ 03:26:45 PM AEST
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| I can truly relate to this. This is a well written poem! |
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