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all the little things
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 04:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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all the little things
a look, a touch, a smile,
shared little things that only last a while,
a panorama of colour, together in a sunsett,
the living photograph of your love's silhouette,
these are the things i want to share with you..
images of vivid reality,
something to come to us in eventuality,
symbols of togetherness and living mortality,
breathing in the moments with all our vitality,
all these little moments i long to share with you,
little things others assume will always be there,
for few precious moments our souls we would bare,
sometimes people take things for granted, 'tis unfaire,
would rather breath air with you than be a millionaire,
we, given them, will never take these little things for granted,
all the many little things, all the happiness to each other we bring,
how much we value our time, sharing love in reality's moments will be so sublime.
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Re: all the little things
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 06:22:57 AM AEST
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| Awww! it is nice to read a beautiful love poem and it is sublime. and I would like to inform that I wrote a little poem with a title " Lady of the forest ".and it must be read by lady fawn as she is my regular reader and a good friend. why should she miss my poem. very fine .its allright. venkat |
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Re: all the little things
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by Tanna on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 09:35:52 AM AEST
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| Such beautiful images are conjured up, Nessa. Lovely write :) |
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Re: all the little things
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by PrincessPage on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 10:26:04 AM AEST
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| Hi ladyfawn, i think that your use of words is very striking! |
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Re: all the little things
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by Lone_er on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 10:27:13 AM AEST
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| Such a lovely poem. Said in simple but wonderful words of inspiration. It is indeed all the little things that make life and love wonderful. I rate this excellent. --Russ |
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Re: all the little things
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 08:22:38 PM AEST
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| Beautiful images .... lovely write Nessa. ... Jan |
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Re: all the little things
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by wolfflow on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 02:11:27 AM AEST
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| nice to see you back writing, this is such a beautiful poem, hope it all comes true for you, big love to you |
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Re: all the little things
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 10:57:03 AM AEST
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| wonderful, wonderful, wonderful, the best things in life are always the little things, loved this one!!!!! |
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Re: all the little things
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by WordPoet on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 11:05:19 PM AEST
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Good focus on lifes important realities. A message we should all take to heart.
Nice write. |
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Re: all the little things
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 03:46:07 AM AEST
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very good message lovely write
Shari |
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Re: all the little things
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by spooky on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 09:11:47 PM AEST
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| beautifully written,,wondreful imagination on the little things,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: all the little things
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by Fwog on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 06:17:50 PM AEST
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G'day ladyfawn,
This is a truly incredible write, so set apart by it's simplicity. Boy I've got some catchin' up to do , a real back log to check out.
Thanks for your beautiful imagery.
Hugz,
Fwog |
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Re: all the little things
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by GregoryGreen04 on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 02:16:46 PM AEST
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| Thanks for your comment on my poem. Yours is beautifully written and enjoyable to read. - Gregory |
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Re: all the little things
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 10:42:49 PM AEST
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What more can I say,Nessa?
AWESOME!!!! You have captured the beauty of blissful true love! Well done!!!
Angel always!!!! Godspeed!!!! joni |
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