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Nautical Dream
Contributed by
DrowningHeart
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Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 11:46:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Glowing rays waking the land.
Visions from horizons dawn.
Tempting beauty surrounding all.
White wings spread and sea gulls fall,
thrashing waves and singing squalls.
Beyond the shore, glistening as stars.
Misting winds of ocean tears,
salt filling the air.
A lullaby sings, as the ocean's scream.
Only to drift away into nautical dream.
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DrowningHeart
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2007-03-12 11:46:01]
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Re: Nautical Dream
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 07:22:25 AM AEST
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I thought this was beautiful. It is amazing what can inspire you in nature. You did a wonderful job and the flow was great.
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Re: Nautical Dream
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 12:02:25 PM AEST
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I'm in love with the sea, and this was a beautiful piece. What are you not sure about? It's beautiful. Well, it may start off a bit shaky, I'm not sure why I think that, but it ends perfectly.
Take care,
David |
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