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Nothing
Contributed by
sour_gurl67
on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 06:26:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Why is she crying?
They always feel so sorry for her
But nothing, they don't do nothing
Reaching out, she's screaming for help
With every cut, as that's her silent surrendering yell
as she gives up
She's tried for so long to deal with this hell
tried to bother no one, she doesn't tell
Nothing, she says absolutley nothing
And the pain builds up on the inside
the lights go out it's blacker than night
and the blade, and the blood, and the yells, and the fights
it's all too much so she tries to feel something
but she feels nothing
Where is she going?
Looks like she's headed no where fast
Cause nothing
She feels like she is nothing
And all her scars, what a tale to tell
She won't try for fear to fail
nothing, they make her feel like nothing
Too much silence, too much silence
There's too much silence
Too much doing nothing
Why is she crying?
They always feel so damn sorry for
But that does nothing!
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Re: Nothing
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 06:58:50 AM AEST
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This was good. I liked how you expressed your emotions through this piece. Nice poem.
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Re: Nothing
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by kalbime_aldin on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 09:57:31 AM AEST
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wow really good poem keep it up
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Re: Nothing
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 10:45:25 AM AEST
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wow!
this is explosively powerful.
i really made me stop and think. |
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