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WITH YOU
Contributed by
scanman77
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Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 11:28:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Words can not describe the way
I feel when I'm with you.
You're the sunshine in my day.
You make all my dreams come true.
I know I can't give you everything,
but I can promise you.
I'll try my best to make you feel
the way that I feel when I'm with you.
They say love doesn't last forever,
but I sure wish it could.
I'd stay with you until the end of time
and love you like I should.
When I'm gone, don't get lonely.
Here's what I want you to do.
Find someone that makes you feel
the way I felt when I was with you.
Copyright ©
scanman77
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2007-03-11 23:28:19]
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Re: WITH YOU
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by ashleigh on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 01:13:34 AM AEST
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Re: WITH YOU
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by moon_light on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 01:08:25 PM AEST
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love is a wonderfull thing. best of luck a beatifull write.
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Re: WITH YOU
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 10:23:44 AM AEST
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Jason~
This was so romantically beautiful. I bet your wife adored this. Your words will be treasured by her forever. I'm so glad I stopped by your pages my friend. I look forward to reading more poetry from you~
A most beautiful write, thanks for sharing it with us~
*warm hugs*
dreamer
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