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Strange Sway
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
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Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 09:34:51 PM in AEST
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What am I doing over here
so cold and lonely
sitting home alone
deep in thoughts...
emotions control me
and there is no escape,
it's kinda strange
to be feeling this way
when I know I need a change
cause I'm starting to like it
when I emotionally sway
in pain.
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Re: Strange Sway
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 10:41:27 PM AEST
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I think this piece works well without the last two words. Shy of that I read this and feel the embrace with this state of mind as it teeters on the brink of intoxication.
Blessings & Healing
Peace
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Re: Strange Sway
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 02:54:58 AM AEST
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It's easy to slip into little pockets of our own little worlds. Where all is to our liking and even some tiimes not so much to our liking.
a write well done as always from you.
Ben |
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Re: Strange Sway
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 11:54:29 AM AEST
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Yup, tell tale time fer a change! A quick capture of a moment ... passing. Nice
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Strange Sway
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 02:45:37 AM AEST
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Come dance with me-n-we'll both let go the pain.
Awesome writing, friend as always.
big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Strange Sway
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 08:14:01 PM AEST
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| I have been there myself. This was a great poem! Keep it up! |
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Re: Strange Sway
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 01:50:26 PM AEST
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i can sooo identify lol...excellent write:)
love n' hugs nessa |
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