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The coliseum.
Contributed by
iodinelove
on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:06:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Walking the side of the road
Like a dog
In the doorway of my dreams
She called the phone
A dying river
Closing the bridge
Of our bodies
As we twisted and fidgeted
In our sleep
With her
I was always alone
Upon the hour of her dismissal
Henceforward passing dreams away
I held the rivers of her back
Stripped the sheaths of stars
From her lips
Drove deep through the tears
Of my eyes
And Prayed
For another chance
To smile
It is never easy
Or proper
The way we mold
Our lives
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2007-03-11 20:06:53]
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Re: The coliseum.
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:31:20 PM AEST
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very interesting... a few lines were especially sad... but overall, it was almost inspirational...
nice twist of emotions |
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Re: The coliseum.
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by needledancing on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 08:29:39 PM AEST
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| A good piece. The last verse sums it all up. |
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Re: The coliseum.
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 01:28:26 AM AEST
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Nice write, Well written.
Whisper |
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