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Sacrificing The Ability To Breathe
Contributed by
Channing
on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 06:05:34 PM in AEST
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Does it hurt when you breathe?
I think it does
For your expressions give you away
In between your wheezing
And weak gasps for air,
Why did you continue?
Why did you persist?
They told you to stop
But you would not listen,
So listen to me now…
Take my lungs
They’re fresh and yours to keep
And if you can keep them clean
They will let you breathe,
Please listen to me
And so as I say
For you know it’s the only way
That you will be able to stay
So you can live to see another day
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2007-03-11 18:05:34]
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Re: Sacrificing The Ability To Breathe
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 06:19:32 PM AEST
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| Very nice poetry. Captures the essence of love very well.. Keep up the good work....Russ |
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Re: Sacrificing The Ability To Breathe
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:33:54 PM AEST
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All smokers need help
good write
serious topic. |
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Re: Sacrificing The Ability To Breathe
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:34:31 PM AEST
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| very nice... intense emotions.. nicely done |
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