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Strangers
Contributed by
Shaina_Nay-Nay
on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 02:56:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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From one sharing a soul to staring across the room
Wondering where I've seen that smile before
That sense of belonging is fading slowly
As the years continue
Has age brought out the sad truth
That differences cannot be ignored?
I try to construct a time machine
To take me back to those blue skies
Was there a time where I wasn't lost in a sea of strange faces?
The harsh cold wind hits hard after the shelter has been torn down
Hearts have been ripped, lies have been told
The blood has dried, but the scars and tears remain
The stars blink out, one by one
But the brightest one remains
That beautiful portal to the past
If only I could reach it...
We've become strangers, you and I...
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Shaina_Nay-Nay
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2007-03-11 14:56:09]
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Re: Strangers
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by priss on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 06:19:19 PM AEST
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i really like this...as we get older, we do alot more soul searching and at times it seems the more we see, the less we know especially about ourselves. anyway, i think you've done a wonderful job here. "the stars blink out, one by one...but the brightest one remains...that beautiful portal to the past...if only i could reach it" absolutely love that! thanks for sharing.
~priss
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Re: Strangers
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:41:15 PM AEST
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| nicely done.. it's an interesting aspect of life that is often left alone and not many bother to think about it in such a way |
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Re: Strangers
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by unknown_utopia on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 08:42:39 PM AEST
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I like that looking into the past thing
good flow... |
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