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From the inside out
Contributed by
girlg0newrong
on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 06:42:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You let me down again, again I let you win
My sky is black again, I let you in again and again
I sell myself so cheap for you
there's nothing I can do
my heart's just weak when it comes to you, and you know this
Kill me from the inside out
You have the power, I have no doubt
and show me what hurtings all about
"More pain!", I cry
I bleed so you can stay alive
You put me down again
I hang my head and it is then, when I see you smile
I feel like an abused child
I just wanna make you laugh
I wanna let you know, my life is in your hands
you have total control
Kill me from the inside out
You have the power, I have no doubt
go on and show me what hurtings all about
"More pain!", I cry
I bleed so you can stay alive
You lips, my blood
I hurt so much
but then, you smile
and it subsides for a little while
My wrists, your knife
has this really become my life?
My love, your need
your need is to make me bleed
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girlg0newrong
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Re: From the inside out
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by Loriann on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 03:02:53 PM AEST
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very powerful write. I love the flow of the words. Very nice .
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Re: From the inside out
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by Mesano on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 10:09:38 PM AEST
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| very dark.. but full of emotion |
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Re: From the inside out
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 07:08:14 AM AEST
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Dark and full of emotions. This was a really good poem. I can relate to the fact that when you are in love with someone you would do anything to make them smile even if it is dragging yourself down to a low level. It is hard. This was a well expressed poem.
Take care
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