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Paralyzed
Contributed by
whiteleo1984
on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 05:26:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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The look in her eyes has mesmerized me,
I am struck by her, paralyzed by those green eyes.
As she moves across the room, I am amazed by her walk.
Her hips, her legs, her eyes, her lips, I can't move.
I try in a desperate attempt to move away,
but I can not.
She moves towards me, her eyes have that look.
I can't breathe, can't move, can't speak.
I am paralyzed by this woman,
and now I am being lead by her out the door.
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2007-03-11 05:26:40] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Paralyzed
(User Rating: 1 ) by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 07:24:30 AM AEST (User
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You did a great job conveying the paralyzed effect. I liked this. You did a good job.
Take care
Christina |
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