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Annabelle's Secret
Contributed by
needledancing
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Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 09:37:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Silly little Annabelle
Had a secret, wouldn’t tell,
Did not know what she would say,
When the voices came today,
Tired of all the strange night dreams,
Waking to her frightening screams.
She couldn’t tell a soul.
No one else would turn their head,
They couldn’t see the poisoned bread,
The laughter with it’s wicked shrill,
The hiding of the Doctors pill,
The faces popping in to view,
They ran from her, what could she do?
She couldn’t tell a soul.
It finally made her hide away,
In places she found safe to stay.
No food would pass her hungered lips,
She lived in chains, fear that grips.
She couldn’t tell a soul.
They buried Annabelle today,
The voices never went away.
The fear she felt tore her to shreds.
The tattered heart, discarded meds.
She couldn’t tell a soul
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needledancing
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Re: Annabelle's Secret
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by emystar on
Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 10:41:53 PM AEST
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Friend,
this writeis heart wrenching but awesomly written.
big huggs,
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Re: Annabelle's Secret
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by Dom on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 04:51:08 AM AEST
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This is a wonderful poem, I love the vivid images in the second stanza. Thank you for writing this poem on a topic so little covered, most poems about mental illness seem to be about depression, bi-polar that sort of thing and its interesting to see your point of view from having worked with people suffering from schizophrenia.
Great work,
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Re: Annabelle's Secret
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by girlg0newrong on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 07:52:56 AM AEST
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Really awesome, well said with lots of emotion.
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Re: Annabelle's Secret
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 11:20:53 AM AEST
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It is very sad and heartbreaking to hear such disorder in human, and it's even more sad to know in your profession you will have to come across such sad stories on a day to day basics. I must not fail to Appreciated your dedication at this point of time.
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Re: Annabelle's Secret
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 01:27:21 PM AEST
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I like that word "awesome" that another commenter used. I would also like to add insightful and heart gripping. Very well done.
wabl
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Re: Annabelle's Secret
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 09:27:41 AM AEST
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In this piece I feel how 'Life' is fragile and how one can 'lose their life' amid the twists of being, secrets and things unspoken. This piece makes up the difference of the that which we cannot understand bringing a glimpse of an 'all too common' occurrence. In part perhaps as science is still burgeoning to address such conditions which stem from deep in our biological history.
Wow you got me thinking on this one...
Excellent
Peace
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Re: Annabelle's Secret
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 05:57:49 PM AEST
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ND .. I know you posted this as fictional, but I know someone who
suffers from this and it's so painful to stand by and not be able to
offer any help. He is such an incredibly intelligent, compassionate
and sweet soul. It hurts to witness his fear and doubt ..
I wish we could understand more about how the human mind works
and that the taboos of society would let go of the chains that hold
poor souls like Annabelle captive .. suffering in silence ~
This was an excellent post, hun. Thanks for sharing it ..
~Breezy
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Re: Annabelle's Secret
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 22nd April 2007 @ 03:41:46 PM AEST
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How sad for there are a million annabelles in
world i know one and am powerless to do a
single thing about it. Beautiful and most
compassionate write.
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