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Reflection in Light
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 01:04:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Small delicate icy feathers
float...
floating....
from the sky
darkened blue
by night
white powder
talcum soft
captured in flight
caught by the reflection
of the artificial
light
February 2007 Watching it snow outside where the outside light shines.
Laura Horner
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2007-03-10 13:04:13]
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Re: Reflection in Light
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by kalbime_aldin on
Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 02:32:11 PM AEST
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thats very good keep up the good work
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Re: Reflection in Light
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by Crow on
Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 06:46:13 PM AEST
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this has me remembering when the beautiful flakes would fall, high in the rockies"
good read. Crow |
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Re: Reflection in Light
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by elle on
Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 08:42:38 PM AEST
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Lovely description...I feeling the beauty without the chill...nice write.
elle |
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Re: Reflection in Light
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by emystar on
Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 11:51:54 PM AEST
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Beautifull scene.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Reflection in Light
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 12:59:42 PM AEST
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A sweet tablespoon of winter that leaves one wanting more and unlike cod liver oil this medicine tastes as good as it is for the soul.
Bravo
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Reflection in Light
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 08:25:55 PM AEST
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I love poems describing snow!!
You did it so well and so vividly!! |
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Re: Reflection in Light
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 05:30:33 PM AEST
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It's funny; I like seeing snowing twice a year --- the first real snowfall, and one for Christmas, and then I'm good till next year --- haha... But I never tire of reading about it in poetry, as it always comes across as so damn eloquent and peaceful! So needless to say; I enjoyed this : )
Keep it up Laura!
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Re: Reflection in Light
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 06:28:26 PM AEST
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"Small delicate feathers"-an excellent metaphor.
I imagine that is exactly how snowflakes look.
I have in fact never seen the snow.
Larkspur. |
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Re: Reflection in Light
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by Wachumiri on
Sunday, 18th March 2007 @ 11:49:30 PM AEST
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Ah, snow... I do miss snow... A great muse, a great inspiration. And you've done well with it.
Take care,
David |
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Re: Reflection in Light
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 05:26:05 PM AEST
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A very visual and pleasant way to describe something as gentle and beautiful as a snow fall. This brings back memories. I live in Alabama so they are distant memories of my child hood in Connecticutt. Wonderful job. I loved it!
- SCM |
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Re: Reflection in Light
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 11:47:55 PM AEST
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Laura~
Hey you, it's so good to see you around my dear friend. I think we both have been away for a while. I hope that all is good and well with you my dear friend.
Snow, I would so much love to see such a beautiful sight. I have never seen snow, but you paint a beautiful picture of it so well with your words my dear friend. So little words written, but such strong images they create into the readers mind.
Absolutely *beautiful* Well done my dear deadhead friend~
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: Reflection in Light
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 07:11:28 AM AEST
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exquisite....... one of my new favorites of your many beautiful poems:)
love n' hugs nessa
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