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more than what you see

Contributed by poemprophet on Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 06:45:16 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

will you please adjust your attutude
it isnt right to be so rude
the things you say are really vicious
they are harmful and malicious
wishing i could make you see
theres more to my identity
like the person trapped inside
this body i'm trying to hide
from wounds that have hit me so hard
leaving my whole body scarred
caused by the fire late on night
that left me looking like a fright
step back and take a second look
my life is like an open book
you should read very carefully
filled with everything you need
to know about the way i feel
which is all to very real
it gets harder every day
to hear the things people will say
i dont know what else to do
its challenging to make it through
a day without pointing and staring
when did this whole world stop caring
about the way we all should treat
other people that we meet
step back and take a second look
my life is like an open book
you should read very carefully
filled with everything you need
to know about the way i feel
which is all to very real
stop judging everyone you see
not fitting the picture of society
because what makes us all unique
is not whats outside-----but underneath
step back and take a second look
my life is like an open book
you should read very carefully
filled with everything you need
to know about the way i feel
which is all to very real

Copyright © poemprophet ... [ 2007-03-10 06:45:16]
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Re: more than what you see (User Rating: 1 )
by kalbime_aldin on Saturday, 10th March 2007 @ 11:48:31 AM AEST
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wow thats a really good poem and so true.i live in another country where english have a bad name so as soon as you live ere or something its an automatic name cause of all the tourist coming out here oh well klive with it really!
very good poem keep it coming xxx

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