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Credence
Contributed by
R0b
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Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 08:17:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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In the familiar darkness of the night.
Comes a turn in one’s fate.
A new card has been dealt.
Another game has been lost.
With my mind on the brink.
Pushed to the limits,
Under these circumstances.
Surrounded on all sides.
By the thoughts of the things I hate the most.
The reminders of the actions that I have done.
The memories burned into my skull.
A scar that will haunt me endlessly.
A throbbing pain, a feeling of hope lost.
And of failure.
Now…
On my knees begging forgiveness.
With a now failing mind.
And an overflowing conscious.
Something must change.
Before I lose it all.
And although my journey has not been,
As rough as others, as yours.
But I have met hardships.
I know the taste of defeat,
Of failure,
Of disgust,
Of pain
Or many feelings that one should never face.
But quitting is not in my future.
That card is not in my deck.
And with weak limbs and at times, short of breath.
I will continue forward.
I will march on.
Although I never want to lose you.
I’m not afraid to walk this world alone.
But don’t get me wrong.
I may be hard to conceive.
But I mean well.
I always have.
As my journey continues.
With more storms looming on the distant horizon.
Another confrontation imminent.
I will try not to falter in my course of action.
I will however,
Never looking back.
And while something of extreme importance was lost.
I will continue.
I will love you forever.
I will hurt and I will heal.
No Regrets.
3/8/07
Rob
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R0b
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2007-03-08 20:17:27]
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Re: Credence
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 9th March 2007 @ 07:15:52 AM AEST
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Although I never want to lose you.
I’m not afraid to walk this world alone.
Wow. At least I know that you are stronger than I am. It is kind of funny in a way or maybe not that I was thinking the other day about how if I ever lost you why would it hurt me so bad because I spent most of my life without you to begin with. But then I realized that I have love for you and I am in love with you and that changes everything. And that I have spent almost a year and two months trying hard and putting everything that I am into this relationship because you are the only one that I can picture growing old with and loving forever. And I know that just because I have done it before alone and all by myself and how much it hurt and killed me. I know that I will not be able to go on in life all by myself. You have been the one who had been there for me the most and who has cared about me more than anyone. You are the one that LOVES me. I am sorry that I had told him that about trust. It wasn't his business but he had asked and he got the truth. I have told you about my trust in you before. I mean did you think that it would have changed so suddenly and been restored. No. Sorry it doesn't work that way. But I can say that I can't believe you when I don't trust you. They are like synonymous with each other. But I can say that I have gained a little trust back Rob. But you hurt me. You brought me down so bad and I am supposed to believe you. I am supposed to trust you. You are the only one that I trusted more than anyone in my whole life. And when that was ripped away from me I thought that... nevermind. What I am so worried about anymore is if we are going to make this last.Because I want to be with you. I love you. If we are going to be together forever. But forever is just a word and nothing lasts forever. I have learned that pleanty of times already.
Anyways. I am glad that you were able to write upon this subject or matter that is being played out right now between you and I. This poem was really well done and I think it is one of your better ones as well. Keep writing. I thought that you did a good job expressing yourself and what you are going through. You did a great job.
Take care
Love always
Christina-xo |
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