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A Conflict
Contributed by
MuhammadShanazar
on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 06:33:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Deep darkness fears me at night,
Sable thoughts surround me tight,
Run I to the dark corners to escape,
Wrestle against inner self and fight,
The conflicting struggle continues,
Till I exhaust and lose the might,
The next day recovers me again,
And the night brings the same plight.
Copyright ©
MuhammadShanazar
... [
2007-03-08 06:33:13]
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Re: A Conflict
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by ShaBa on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 06:48:47 AM AEST
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It's like why struggle with the darkness, You only know that it will come again. I like it, thank you for this.
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Re: A Conflict
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 09:52:20 AM AEST
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hmmm quite strong meaning here really ...
nice write
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Re: A Conflict
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 09:52:24 AM AEST
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hmmm quite strong meaning here really ...
nice write
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Re: A Conflict
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by flamingblade on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 10:08:42 AM AEST
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short, but very good
good job
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Re: A Conflict
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 10:38:38 AM AEST
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this is a wise write.. I like how its so small of a piece but yet so powerful and with meaning.. awesome job
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