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Bleed Black
Contributed by
girlg0newrong
on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 02:32:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What do I mean?
Do you feel anything?
What am I here for?
Am I not what you were looking for?
Why am I so grey?
Why has all feeling seemed to fade?
Except for pain, which is growing stronger every day
I bleed black again
I'm playing a game I know I can't win
I'm bleeding black again
I bleed the deepest kind of red
Is it written on my face?
Am I a complete disgrace?
Do you do this out of hate?
Or is the love too much to take?
You stand and stare so cold
like you can see through to my soul
What is it that I don't do?
Why am I despised by you?
I bleed black again
I'm playing a game I know I can't win
I'm bleeding black again
I bleed the deepest kind of red
From you is where I learned,
what it feels like to get burned
and I learned from you how to fail
and how to survive in hell
how to make the darkness home
how to get used to being alone
and most of all how to be weak,
every thing you deny you teach!
I bleed black again
I'm always playing games I know I can't win
I am bleeding black again
I bleed only the deepest darkest red
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Re: Bleed Black
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 10:41:21 AM AEST
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a very expressive and powerful write. I really liked this piece.. very heart felt
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Re: Bleed Black
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 12:06:51 PM AEST
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| This poem is soaked in emotion. I love it. Excellent job. |
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Re: Bleed Black
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 07:10:18 AM AEST
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Powerful. Full of emotions that just seep from your words. I can relate to this with one of my ex boyfriends. This was a well written poem and I like How you repeated that stanza throughout the poem. Great job.
Take care
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