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exposed
Contributed by
elle
on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 09:18:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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through lace skies, like tears of heaven
the evening showers from above
stream gently down
and come to rest
upon our souls
like liquid love.
my wild bouquet, once close at hand
is bruised, resembling time bygone.
wind blown blossoms
float multi-colored
onto the path
that leads us home.
desire, the web we're tangled in
unspoken thought, threshhold divine.
the you of you
I know so well
feelings linger
illusive and fine.
this gift is all I have to give
a tune to weave a liliac song.
each note cascading
all ways reaching
ever towards a love
for which we long.
it is not cold in our sweet house
though seasons beat upon the door.
for you are here
and warmth for me
and I will ask
for nothing more.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2007-03-07 21:18:46]
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Re: exposed
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 09:27:01 PM AEST
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Wow!
This write is heavenly beautifull!
I couldn't squeze out more than five points so I'll just say this write hit the rictor scale all the way up the top.
big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: exposed
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 07:27:40 PM AEST
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elle .. the title is perfect and what follows is so incredibly
sensual and honest. I especially love the last stanza. The
words are beautiful and it floats off the tongue so
gracefully ..
stunning ~
~Breezy |
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Re: exposed
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th December 2008 @ 09:47:44 AM AEST
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your finest work i have read so far. the imagery is top class. the first stanza is absolutely stellar. a stunning write.
-phil |
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Re: exposed
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th July 2010 @ 11:50:48 PM AEST
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| Perfectly awesome. I was right. You can write about anything. |
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