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Just Wait!
Contributed by
k2kdesigner
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Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 11:37:25 AM in AEST
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Will you wait for me?
I promise someday it''ll be
I think about you everyday
I want you in every way
And just when I think it won''t work
I think of you again and in my heart you lurk
I feel I''m doing us both wrong
But I promise it won''t be long
I must make up my mind and follow my heart
With you i wanna be -- with him I wanna part
I can''t be greedy and have you both
I want'' you more but I don''t think you know
I wish you knew I think of you day and night
I wish you knew that "me and you" feels right
I wish you knew how I yearn for you
I wish you knew how bad you want me too
I check my messages hoping you''re there
You usually aren''t-- like you don''t care
Have I waited too long and put you off?
or have you simply had enough?
Why isn''t love "easy"?
What about "it" makes it hard to be?
Can''t you simply just "be in love with me"
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Re: Just Wait!
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by Ari on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 12:06:52 PM AEST
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wow really well written...i feel like i go through something like this every single day
i think most people feel the same sort of pain, maybe not quite as similar as having to pick between two (like it appears you must do in your situation) but wishing the other person knew how you felt and being worried about being too late or the feeling to not be mutual....so goes life
thanks for the inspiration! |
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Re: Just Wait!
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 01:17:54 PM AEST
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When you truly love NOTHING can keep you apart ...................
If you ARE truly loved you wont be kept apart ...
They will come to you thru thick or thin ... and you must take your chances and leave to be withthem ... IF you think and feel it is TRUE LOVE ............
beautiful write ... my heart goes out to you in such confusion ... but trust me .. Love TRUE LOVE is such a beautiful joy and experience if it isnt? then it isnt TRUE or meant to be
Good luck
Dee xx |
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Re: Just Wait!
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 01:22:03 PM AEST
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you can clearly feel the pain in this peice.. however maybe this person isn't around because you have someone and doesn't want to be the reason of the breakup or departure.. and jumping from one relationship right into another never ends how you want it.. but this isa very creative well expressed piece.. good luck
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Just Wait!
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by tifrob on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 12:29:47 AM AEST
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From what they tell me, "sometimes love just isn't enough."
Sorrow Looks down. Worry looks around. Faith looks up.
Good luck,
J~ |
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