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The Sinner

Contributed by Immortal-Dragon21 on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 10:53:24 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Recently i was told by doctors I have problems with my heart which is unfixable
& have been told not to expect to live to see my 22nd birthday. This following poem
Is an acount of my life what it was is & has become I am a Sinner. This will haunt me
For the remainder of my days, I will post as much more poetry on here as i can though.
Before I leave, I would like to express my unending gratitude to all those who read my
Poetry & commented telling me what you thought of it.
Thank you all from the deepest part of my soul.

(Immortal Dragon)



The Sinner

Long has the journey become
It would seem that I had left this place yesterday
Yet it has been an age ago since I was last here
Finally I can rest my shattered spirit
In the bosom of my beginnings
So far have I travelled
Across the clouds of time
And the flames of eternity
Take me now before I forget
& drag you deep into my insanity & undoing
“Blessed is the man who suffers temptation”
The words ring shrill and unbearable in my mind
From the mouths of violent apparitions of my father
Take me now…I beg of you
Let me suffer no more this torment that has befallen me
Remove my eyes so I am blind
Remove my limbs so I am Lame
Drown me in a blood filled tide & burry me in the clouds
Stand me in an empty room desolate, bleak and decrepit
This is heaven, a sinner’s heaven, MY heaven
There is no god in my heaven




Copyright © Immortal-Dragon21 ... [ 2007-03-07 10:53:24]
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Re: The Sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by Ari on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 12:09:41 PM AEST
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wow thats some heavy stuff dude, I am sorry for your troubles (although you may not want pity)

the poem is very very well written, i like how it progresses nicely from the begining right up to where you make your point in the end...it flows with incredible clarity


Re: The Sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by Malcolmsdreamgirl on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 01:21:30 PM AEST
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This poem? it makes me speechless...



Dee xx


Re: The Sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 01:24:49 PM AEST
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this is a very powerful write.. its very expressive and like self cleansing.. great job

vampyress Jenni


Re: The Sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 12:10:00 AM AEST
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Very sad but very powerfull write.
God is God to all and the God I know will never leave you.
I believe in miracles as I'm a walking, talking miracle.
When the folks on this site start praying, prayer changes things.
One can see you are very humble is this write.
Love is all things as (God is love).
big huggs, prayer, joy, peace, luv,
emy


Re: The Sinner (User Rating: 1 )
by girlg0newrong on Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 02:38:25 AM AEST
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Really awesome dude and I wish you well with whatever happens. Poem's great.
Luv & blessings
-K




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