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The Answer
Contributed by
needledancing
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Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 10:44:02 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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I look in the mirror and on my face I see lines where the tears have traveled,
Hair unraveled,
Why does the sadness of others sit upon my face?
Why the gaze of space?
It’s their pain not mine.
Yet I remember it like yesterday, fresh like a knife, how did I get through it?
Who was there to make the pain subside? Who taught me how not to hide the pain?
I can’t remember a face. Was it just time that took the memories away? Was it age?
Was it distance? Was it indifference? Was it denial?
Through the mist of tears the answer finds me.
It was Love.
Once again safe within the warmth of love it touches the depth of me.
I realize the power of just one love beam and I smile once more from the glow.
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needledancing
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Re: The Answer
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 10:50:17 PM AEST
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This hits close to the heart, nicely done.
Michelle |
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Re: The Answer
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 11:33:12 PM AEST
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Love is the answer to many questions and I feel the cold sober mortality of this hitting home as well. Chin and with beam, smile & glow stay the course.
Blessings & Thank You for this post.
Peace
Yang |
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by priss on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 11:54:25 PM AEST
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exceptionally written..."i realize the power of just one love beam and i smile once more from the glow" and now i'm smiling...truly beautiful.
~priss |
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 06:57:15 AM AEST
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This was beautifully written. I liked this a lot. It does hit close to the heart.
Take care
Christina-xo |
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Re: The Answer
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 11:29:34 AM AEST
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Beautiful heart felt write
Like you your woeds just have the power to glow |
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Re: The Answer
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 11:37:41 AM AEST
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This is beautiful ..... and you are living proof life goes on after love ... to love and love and love again .............
Dee xx |
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 11:53:32 AM AEST
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wow this is a very well penned expression.. so many hide pain inside.. this is stunning and well expressed
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Re: The Answer
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by Ari on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 12:15:08 PM AEST
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thank you for this poem
its gives me hope :) |
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Re: The Answer
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 04:42:46 PM AEST
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| Wonderfully written and very inspiring! Reminds me of a sunbeam that just happens to, as I'm driving into the sun, always shine on my pickup right down from the sun! Sometimes there's two!! Your poems brings the same feeling of inspiration. |
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Re: The Answer
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 06:50:21 PM AEST
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What an incredibly optimistic view..
I was warmed by the beautiful sentiments found in especially
the last two lines of this. And yet, I am reminded of those
that, even with love staring them straight in the face, still find it
hard to embrace and let the warmth of love comfort their
hearts with a peace unknown by any other emotion.
Beautiful work. Thank you for this ~
~Breezy |
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