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Regret Meet Regression
Contributed by
desolated_denial
on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 09:03:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Give me my permission to cry.
A picture to frame those rare moments when I don't feel like dying.
He told me he loved me just the other day.
A perfect stranger's words left me speechless.
I don't know his name, but he saved my mind.
If only for that day,
I felt it all fall away.
Driving lines keep passing by.
Blurred together like they just don't matter.
Songs named Requiem are echoing in the distance,
Near my ear and I'm deaf and numb.
Lights cast a worried glare over mine.
A former life of red and white are rushing by.
I feel accomplished in my nothing, yet.
Come congratulate me as I watch my mess.
I gave you life, don't throw it up in my face.
My guilt and my memory are chasing all of this.
A former drawing of a collection in my memory.
I pictured the scene.
The scene that you want to see.
I pictured it, and it fit so perfectly.
An object, any object will do.
Crush the front, coming nearer as I watch with a blank face.
Metal crashing and crushing like paper.
Coming nearer to take me away.
I don't know if it would hurt,
I don't know if I'd remember,
I don't know what would happen if everyone suddenly knew that I exist.
Maybe they'd talk about me.
I'd be in the papers.
Another case to file away in your complaint.
The lines of guilt and regret, blend closer to define,
what I lack and what I regress and feel.
Desperation is such a beautiful name.
You carried it well and you gave it to me.
It doesn't fit, I'm drowning in the seamless seams.
Desperation came a size too big.
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2007-03-06 21:03:39]
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Re: Regret Meet Regression
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 09:29:35 PM AEST
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Re: Regret Meet Regression
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 07:08:25 AM AEST
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This was deep. Keep writing about how you are feeling. I am not going to be one of those people who tell you that suicide isn't the way to go because to be honest I came close to doing that many times myself. I can relate to how you are feeling but only the way that I had felt this myself. I don't know exactly what you are going through and what the emotions and pain is doing to you. Everyone is different. But keep writing this out, no matter if it makes sense. It helps. This poem was really good.
Take care
*hugs*
Christina-xo
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