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~DICE~

Contributed by misfitme on Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 03:07:59 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems







Made to dance in the palm~

of a loosely balled fist

Where lady lucks sweet breath blew~

in want of fates assist...


Fortunes own shining duo~

polished to entice

Young fiends from their innocents~

to pay the pipers price...


At last with the flick of a wrist~

& the out folding of fingers

Chances self is given to flight~

in which no caution lingers...


Once down touch the tumbling pair~

allowing no look back

Destiny settles into place~

before the bets upon her stacked...









Copyright © misfitme ... [ 2007-03-06 15:07:59]
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Re: ~DICE~ (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 06:55:34 PM AEST
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Gambling is an Universal fever infected by lady luck Virus, and you have visualized the entire scenario beautifully in words.
great write.

FRANCO


Re: ~DICE~ (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 08:54:03 PM AEST
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This piece evoked "Alea iacta est."
Before madness sets in as an insider's credo: If they're not throwing you out, you're doing something wrong.
And here in lies perhaps the pieces intent making its case for destiny's behalf that some should never wager at all.

Bravo
AJ


Re: ~DICE~ (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 08:30:44 PM AEST
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Young fiends from their innocents~ to pay the pipers price... Great line, nice flow and description in to this world of dreams and illusion. lovely poetry as always.



Ben


Re: ~DICE~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 11:56:21 AM AEST
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I LOVE Dice! Both this beautifully penned poem and those square little suckers! 'Specially five of 'em in Yahtzee! They call me "Mr. Yahtzee." I love all five of 'em heedin' my call t' show up together identical from my laid out palm! 'Specially 'n' most often the sixes! Boxcars times two 'n' a half! Great work, Missy!

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy


Re: ~DICE~ (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 05:51:41 PM AEST
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Makes me wanna head straight to Vegas, which, incidently, is my dog's name : )

I'm sure most of us know (and have experienced) gambling's haunting tune that lulls one in... but who knew it could also be poetic when penned by a talented Miss?!?
Thanks for the read : )



~Scorp.


Re: ~DICE~ (User Rating: 1 )
by CuriousitysCat on Saturday, 28th April 2007 @ 01:35:35 AM AEST
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YAY FOR GAMBLING!

teehee.

I loooooved this really though.

;]

"Fortunes own shining duo~

polished to entice

Young fiends from their innocents~

to pay the pipers price..."

You can not imagine how this stanza drew me to it.

~jlC


Re: ~DICE~ (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 10:28:05 PM AEST
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Excellent. I think we have all experienced the pull of that power...that one chance that we could win. Very powerful draw lady luck can have on us. A fantastic piece.


Re: ~DICE~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 02:41:02 AM AEST
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Well,you certainly got into the mind of your friend ,and this worked tremendously well.
'Fortunes own shining duo'...I won't be forgetting that little gem.
Enjoyed this one,well captured,

Den


Re: ~DICE~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 06:01:39 PM AEST
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Like many other vices it can be so easy to always say "just once more and I'll get lucky...". The trick is knowing when to stop or it can be a downwards spiral.
Great write, you really got inside your friend's mind for this one!

Take care,
Dmo




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