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NO LONGER TWO
Contributed by
openheart
on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 07:37:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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THE RAINDROPS ARE FALLING
FROM HEAVEN ABOVE.
THE ANGELS ARE CRYING
FOR A LOST LOVE.
THE BIRDS AREN'T SINGING
THEIR SONGS TO HEAR
THE BUTTERFLIES AREN'T FLYING
SO WE CAN'T GO NEAR
THE BUBBLING BROOK IS STILL AS CAN BE
NO MORE REFLECTIONS OF YOU,AND ME.
I LOOK IN THE MIRROR
THERE'S ONLY ONE NOW I SEE.
WHERE DID YOU GO
WHAT DID I DO?
THE QUIET NOISE IS DEAFENING TO ME
IT WAS SO MUCH BETTER
WHEN THE REFLECTION WAS TWO.
AS I WAS STANDING THERE NEXT TO YOU.
WHERE DID YOU GO
WHAT DID I DO
THERE'S ONLY ONE,NO LONGER TWO.
Copyright ©
openheart
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2007-03-06 07:37:12]
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Re: NO LONGER TWO
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 12:27:20 PM AEST
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a very sad well penned out write.. you can feel the emptiness in this piece great job
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Re: NO LONGER TWO
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by soulsearching43 on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 01:10:25 PM AEST
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great poem it flows very nicely heartbreaking
theme i hope you feel better soon
keep writing
dawn |
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Re: NO LONGER TWO
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 6th March 2007 @ 04:45:26 PM AEST
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Incredibly written but sad.
It's destined to be a masterpeice as Most folks can relate.
Kep writing as you know it will free your soul.
Hang tuff, big huggs,
emy |
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Re: NO LONGER TWO
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by AirHead on
Wednesday, 7th March 2007 @ 04:33:55 PM AEST
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| Can relate totally to your simple but true words |
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