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My Visa to Afghanistan
Contributed by
crazyn
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Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 05:56:45 PM in AEST
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My Visa to Afghanistan.
My city of justice tags me just because I have a beard
Our city of justice stares at us when we walk its streets
Your city of justice has made me a felon just because I go to my mosque five times a day.
My city of justice makes me feel like the prisoner from hell
He who gets stalked but no one catches him
Our city of justice has kept my nerves on edge an alien in my own planet
Your city of justice has hated me till I have started to doubt my own innocence
My city of justice now bites me
The footpath feels like a track of burning coal barbecued Muslim
The air feels like burning flesh a bit like mutton or is it my feet?
The trees wither at my glance as to say go away or is it I am sorry?
The children across the road now just freeze at my sight that thought intrigues my sleep at night.
All because in my passport it says ENTRY AFGHANISTAN – 2 DAYS VISA.
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crazyn
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Re: My Visa to Afghanistan
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by Saloni on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 11:04:29 AM AEST
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| wanaaaaaaboutttt disssss guyyyyyyy next level heroooo |
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Re: My Visa to Afghanistan
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by onlyoneheart on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 11:18:13 AM AEST
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godbless you nice poem. i just want to say have another piece of patience ,(ennama yowaffa al saberoon ajrahom beghayr hesab)
people who was patient will have unlimited great things as u know ... may god help you and makes other people loves you , and just don't be angry on them , they just don't know and at last , smile to anyone even he hates u.. maybe someday one loves ur smile and knows the right road because of it... peace with you |
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Re: My Visa to Afghanistan
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by onlyoneheart on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 11:18:34 AM AEST
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godbless you nice poem. i just want to say have another piece of patience ,(ennama yowaffa al saberoon ajrahom beghayr hesab)
people who was patient will have unlimited great things as u know ... may god help you and makes other people loves you , and just don't be angry on them , they just don't know and at last , smile to anyone even he hates u.. maybe someday one loves ur smile and knows the right way because of it... peace with you |
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Re: My Visa to Afghanistan
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by yangdantien on
Thursday, 15th March 2007 @ 01:25:35 PM AEST
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This is why whenever I fly I carry a half eaten Ham sandwich and a opened bottle of beer. Clearly this will get worse before it gets better.
Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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