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My Heart's Voice
Contributed by
SeXyDrAgOn
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Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 01:08:59 PM in AEST
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The words speak beyond their own meaning
The letters dance across the page
He writes each a tiny masterpiece
And sends them here to their own stage
They perform a magnificent show
Each line a tantilizing score
And when the last words take their final bow
It leaves me breathless and wanting more
Each write he's painted me a picture
A vivid description of his emotion
His pen must steam within his fingers
Fueled by a burning devotion
His pen a dedicated voice
A heartfelt expression of passions
His style and grace all falls into place
With words dressed in ballroom fashions
They dance around my heart
With the love that they are flaunting
The affection and inspiration
Its all so very taunting
The voice in my heart calls out
When I read him (so fortunately)
it leaves me yearning for words he speaks
To one day be coming from me
You just may be the one to take me out from under the rock who's presence has long prevented me from writing about the man my heart truly belongs to
Copyright ©
SeXyDrAgOn
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Re: My Heart's Voice
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 01:23:23 PM AEST
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This was a very well penned piece of perfection for your appreciation for Ben's work and, as you may and may have already found out, so many wonderful writers here at YPDC. I think you may count yerself as one, if ya don't mind a cowboy compliment. Tip o' my hat to ya. Fine work here!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: My Heart's Voice
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 01:56:07 PM AEST
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Beautifully dedicated
and i support all that is here
he is a fine writer and so are you |
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Re: My Heart's Voice
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 02:00:43 PM AEST
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what a beautiful devotional write.. this place is great and has many wonderful poets on here.. great job in expression
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Re: My Heart's Voice
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by Kristina_Simpson_Stewart on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 02:54:16 PM AEST
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Wow, truly masterful, your words flowing from the page, painting the reader pictures of there own. Amazing write!
-Kristina |
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Re: My Heart's Voice
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by Sena on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 03:27:00 PM AEST
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Very nice! Keep writing....it is something that suits you. Thx. for sharing.
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Re: My Heart's Voice
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 03:39:53 PM AEST
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Wow what a poignant dialogue between poets as the depth of love penetrates all veneer's and if given a chance changes us at our core.
Many Blessings
Bravo
Peace
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Re: My Heart's Voice
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 01:22:18 AM AEST
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That was a lovlely write to Ben. Well written. The words are like magic that keeps the reader reading. Emotion is felt also in this write. Again well written.
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Re: My Heart's Voice
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by Whisper on
Wednesday, 28th March 2007 @ 12:43:36 PM AEST
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Excellent write .Well deserved ode to Ben.
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Re: My Heart's Voice
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 6th April 2007 @ 04:34:32 PM AEST
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Thank you i'm truly honored and most appreciatetive. and Quite happy that you've
once again ventured out and are engaging in love. thank you again and all the best to you.
You are most deserving of it.
Ben |
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