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Your Still That Girl To Me . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 05:14:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Oh
you know it
don't you? it's there in
many way's, every time i look
at you i see our younger
days.
Those
hungry years
when love was new
our baby on the way,
a kiss good by and off
i went to work another
day.
You'd
weave your spell around me
like a seamtress weaving cloth,
into
your flame of passion i was
drawn just like a
moth.
A
sweet
and caring mother
such a beauty in your
prime,
who
only grew
more beautiful
amidst the passing
time.
Yes
you know it
don't you? like
every women does,
remembering our yesterday's
with everything that
was.
Yet
worry not my lovely
for even at this
age,
your
still that
premadonna,
upon my heart's
stage.
My
partner
in a thing called love
that made us who we are,
who's gleam of love within her
eyes would shame the
brightest
star.
And
always
i will show you
still how much you
mean to
me,
for
were
my heart
a mirror your
reflection you
would
see.
So
wonder not that
at this age how true
my love could be, just
read the words upon this
page,
YOUR
STILL THAT
GIRL TO
ME.
XO
Ben
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myheartsvoice
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Re: Your Still That Girl To Me . . . Ben
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by MisfitMe on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 11:28:31 PM AEST
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"You'd
weave your spell around me
like a seamtress weaving cloth,
into
your flame of passion i was
drawn just like a
moth."
In much the same manner as these words drew me into the rest of your write...
Greatjob!!!
BigLove
~me
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Re: Your Still That Girl To Me . . . Ben
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 10:04:21 AM AEST
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wow I love the expression in this.. its so well worded.. its like an aging love that unfolds deeper.. beautiful devotion and another wonderful write by you..
vampyress jenni |
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Re: Your Still That Girl To Me . . . Ben
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by SeXyDrAgOn on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 11:57:14 AM AEST
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| wow, I wish I were half the poet you are |
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Re: Your Still That Girl To Me . . . Ben
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 02:19:42 PM AEST
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As always your wife is a beautiful person
with a kind man to let her know.
It sudates me into a place i long been from.
I can't appraciate your words more. |
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Re: Your Still That Girl To Me . . . Ben
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by priss on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 02:25:33 PM AEST
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wow, what a beautiful poem. so sweet and loving you are to write this. sounds like the two of you are so blessed to have each other. truly a delight to read.
~p |
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