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Just Repeating
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
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Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 03:32:48 AM in AEST
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An eternity of contemplation,
Lost inside myself.
Just repeating, Repeating
The same old dream,
The same old lie.
Trapped in my own
Version of reality.
No entrance, no exit,
No change.
A world living
The same day over,
All inside my head.
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
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2007-03-04 03:32:48]
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Re: Just Repeating
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 12:39:22 PM AEST
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Most of us are another day another dollar another page carved in stone
Even if we search for those meanings to open the doors inside our own minds
Rational thought tells us we need a second opinion.
Buddha, Shamanism, Christianity, What ever
as long as you do your best and follow the golden rule "if you don't like something don't you do it to"
Thanks for this piece
Thought provoking
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Re: Just Repeating
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 01:19:54 PM AEST
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"It's Groundhog Day" and you know the only remedy is to fall in love with your life, help others, and find a way to be happy in the moment so you can avoid the 'Three-peat'
Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Just Repeating
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 06:20:24 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. Good job. |
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